Peer Review Workshop (Portfolio Project)- Racial Discrimination in America

Peer Review Workshop (Portfolio Project)- Racial Discrimination in America

1_ The author discusses the Race problem and he mention the author and book name that related to his essay, but his thesis is not clear enough.

2_ first part of the essay was a bit confusing; his argument is not clear, and he did not mention the book authors and page number when he writes his evidence.

3_ I would you like to know more about the topic in his introduction that can enhance the essay and that supports his thesis clearly.

4_ First part of the essay is not clear and do not work with the project, but his conclusion work well for the project.

5_ Overall, he did a great job the new information that I learned make me think differently about people of color, we should respect everyone and no matter what color is skin.

DIRECTIONS:

Hooray for your very last peer review!

Step 1: First, please carefully review the Portfolio Project materials:

Step 2: By Friday at 11:59 pm, submit your rough draft of the Portfolio Project. Note that you will not be assigned a peer review partner if you do not submit on time.

Step 3: By Saturday at 8:00 am, Canvas will automatically assign you a partner. To see who your partner is, come back to this assignment. On the top right, it will say Submitted, and below it will tell you who your partner is (for more info on that, watch the video at the end). It will work the same way it did with Essay 3.

Once you have a partner and access to his or her essay, you will go in and read it carefully, making comments in places where the writer can improve.

Step 4: Once you are done commenting, fill out the following CARES worksheet. You can either upload/attach completed worksheet as a submission comment or you can copy your notes from the Cares Worksheet and type them as a submission comment. (Let me know if you have difficulties with this.)

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